SHORT FILM SCRIPT

YOU WROTE A SCREENPLAY

AND NOW?

You wrote a screenplay for a short film but you have the feeling that something is missing in there? You have an idea for a short film but don’t know how original it is? You have several ideas or scripts and are not sure which you should follow up on?


LET ME HELP YOU!

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My name is David M. Lorenz and I am a filmmaker and film distributor for years now.

I have seen hundreds of short films, read heaps of screenplays and I have written a B.A. thesis about the structure of short films.

The films written and directed by me have travelled to more than 80 countries and have been screened at over 600 film and music festivals. And I have won more than 60 awards for my work.

I had the chance to communicate with around 7000 film festivals at my job for one of the biggest film festival distribution agencies out there!  After all those years I know what kind of films will be screened and which ones won’t.

WHAT I CAN DO FOR YOU:

  • read the script
  • send you a two page analysis in which I give you:
  • my opinion about the scripts strength and weakness
  • my ideas about structure, dialogue, characters and story
  • an estimation about how round everything is
  • a list with a few comparable short films

all of that for 149,00 Euro

If you are interested 
send me your script 
and your questions to

scriptdavidmlorenz.com

I will answer you as soon as possible.

I won’t share your script with any outside parties for sure.

* 10% of your payment will go to a good cause